go check it out! my second flash ever! and the first episode of the exciting Paradigm series!!!!
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I watched ur video and it stinks.But u can make it better with a better story. PS. I voted for ur submission.
Sorry, did i insult u. all u hav to do is make the flash better in the scnd ep.
I see, but can you explain what you found were the problems, I would like something a bit more specific then, "it stinks", actual described problems help me focus on what I need to improve.
u see,u need a better story!!!Tats the main thing in getting a good movie and a lot of fans!!
also u need a lot more action
dont forget to respond!!!
sorry. Yes, actually, episode 2 is planned to be action packed, as cloud destoys kabula from the inside, and yoshi fights the dragon, the sotrytelling wasn't very included in this episode, however, episodes 2 on will reveal a lot.
P.s. i love supermariobrosZ series like u do.u need a lot of action in ur movie like supermariobrosZ.
hey!!want to be friends?
actually,i hav to study now.please respond tommarow!!!
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