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Paradigm episode 1 out!

2009-01-15 17:28:18 by metlwing

go check it out! my second flash ever! and the first episode of the exciting Paradigm series!!!!

Paradigm episode 1 out!


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TheGautham911111TheGautham911111

2009-01-15 17:42:55

I watched ur video and it stinks.But u can make it better with a better story. PS. I voted for ur submission.


TheGautham911111TheGautham911111

2009-01-15 17:46:55

Sorry, did i insult u. all u hav to do is make the flash better in the scnd ep.

metlwing responds:

I see, but can you explain what you found were the problems, I would like something a bit more specific then, "it stinks", actual described problems help me focus on what I need to improve.


TheGautham911111TheGautham911111

2009-01-15 19:04:49

u see,u need a better story!!!Tats the main thing in getting a good movie and a lot of fans!!


TheGautham911111TheGautham911111

2009-01-15 19:07:39

also u need a lot more action


TheGautham911111TheGautham911111

2009-01-15 19:08:14

dont forget to respond!!!

metlwing responds:

sorry. Yes, actually, episode 2 is planned to be action packed, as cloud destoys kabula from the inside, and yoshi fights the dragon, the sotrytelling wasn't very included in this episode, however, episodes 2 on will reveal a lot.


TheGautham911111TheGautham911111

2009-01-15 19:11:37

P.s. i love supermariobrosZ series like u do.u need a lot of action in ur movie like supermariobrosZ.


TheGautham911111TheGautham911111

2009-01-15 19:21:22

hey!!want to be friends?


TheGautham911111TheGautham911111

2009-01-15 19:22:17

please respond!!!


TheGautham911111TheGautham911111

2009-01-15 19:25:14

actually,i hav to study now.please respond tommarow!!!